This was my first piece of work and so it has been very close to my heart. I wrote it when I was in 8th Grade.
Our whole life can be compared to a day in which all men and women play their parts. With the freshness of dawn,our life begins with freshness and calmness of infancy. As our day progresses our life also progresses. After the dawn, morning arrives in a day, like the stage of school child arrives in our life. After the departure of of morning, the day becomes alert and starts glittering with the sunlight. Similarly,in our life the stage of adolescence comes which is followed by the stage in which man becomes enthusiastic,hot tempered like the fearing brightness of the sun. After he outgrows this stage, he falls in the age of maturity,wisdom & family person.Then the day falls in the hands of dusk,where the dusk starts gathering its family members, i.e stars. As the sun sets in a day,the enthusiasm in our life also sets and our life switches on to the old age. After the twilight, the night comes, which is a sign of the ending of the day & in our life the stage of senility comes which ends our eventful life. This is how a day has, its day & night and our life has birth & death.
lovely. and so true.
Thank you very much 🙂
I like your perspective, Gupta. It’s an easy read, bro. Keep on writing. The world could sure use it!
-Herbie
Thanks Herbie. Yeah, it’s a bit naive. I wrote it when I was 13.
Reallly???
Yes Shreya!
Well written Comparison to nature and life ! 🙂 Superb 🙂
Glad you loved it 🙂
Great concept! Very creative!
Thanks Teri!
I love the poetry in this post… beautiful. 😉
poetry? 😯
Oh Tapish did you have to make those funny eyes!!!? 😆 What I meant was that I love the poetic, lyrical quality of the post… When words are put together beautifully, they have a rhythm, a musical quality. Does this help explain my comment? TY! 🙂
Oh yes sure it did help!
No, that was not being funny, that was shock 😉
Now, I totally get your point.
Thank you 🙂
BTW, How did you make those eyes…? I’d love to use that one sometime. 😉
That’s 8 O.
http://codex.wordpress.org/Using_Smilies
This link will be a help!
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I landed here searching for your first blog-versary wala post! I guess September is the month for our blogs..rights!
Congratulations!
Oh yeah!
I read yours too, so got to know this 😉
Thanks a bunch, Amit!!
Haha! Many best wishes to you in this new year!!
Thanks and same to you. Keep rocking and blogging!
Many many happy returns of the day! wish you a wonderful birthday full of joy and happiness ,Tapish!
Thank you so very much for your kind wishes and blessings.
🙂
ohh it was ur b’day …happy belated b’day ,well mine was on 28:)….now one can easily understand the title LIFE OF 24 HOURS…..nice vocab gud1
Oh thank you Megha and wish you the same 😛
Thanks for the appreciation!
Thanks for liking my page, Tapish Gupta 🙂
Your writings are great and honest. Keep the spirit going bro!
Thank you for taking time to comment. Happy Blogging!
nicely you compared a day and lifetime.every stage is important.old age and death is compared to dusk night.now many love and enjoy the night or the dusky atmosphere ,but do we enjoy old age.most are afraid of old age and death which are truths.
Hey thanks bud! Glad you liked the concept.